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yay!

I had about as much fun watching this as I did reading the reviews.

Awesome.

The person behind me is an idiot, you should be able to post whatever you want as long as it follows the rules, and this does.

That was pure genius.

Seriously, the dialogue was completely perfect! The drawings were stylized and intricate, the themes and everything, really interesting and well crafted. A great satire about what most business men's lives have boiled down to, and a great parody of modern fantasy. Overall, a wonderful creative masterpiece of flash animation! Truly some of your best work!!

I didn't laugh . . .

Hey, that was pretty funny. I didn't laugh really, but it was entertaining, well acted, very well drawn . . . you know all the stuff that makes a good cartoon. I have a couple problems though--whenever your characters actually move, like, when they move their arms and stuff, the drawing quality goes down terribly. The begin to look like bad scribbles.

I like how your experimenting, but I'd get rid of some of the artificial things, like the bleeping of the swear words. You should give the word "fuck" just as much importance as any other word in the dialogue.

Well-

The music fit the animation fairly well, but my main problem is the story, which seems to be an afterthought. This whole animation was just one big stock story. The animation was better than the norm, so I give you credit there.
(I wish I could give you a 6.5 but I can't)

Ugh...

A great start-I was sure that this was going to end with a bang, you know, something piss-my-pants hilarious. The build up was tremendous man-and that is the problem, since the ending was crap.

sirjeffofshort responds:

The ending seems to be hit or miss, so I can't hold that against you. I know what you mean by the fact that we seemed to have a build up and then throw you for a curve at the end, it is a comedic technique that doesn't always hit home for everyone so I can certainly understand some peoples dismay, my main hope is that you found it enjoyable enough to watch our future (or maybe even check out some of our old) flashes as each one is unique and has a life of its own and I am sure you will find others you will enjoy more.

Its alright.

Incredible stills mate, but you need some more animation.

This was great!

Hilarious! I love the little details too!

Amazing!

A little rough, but great nonetheless, I especially like how all the characters have weight, and how you played with the timing to emphasize movements. exempli gratia, when one panda sliced the other ones head off.

This is wonderful!

Disturbing, terrifically animated...thats really I can say...

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